My boyfriend and I were the only ones at my house and no one else of course. My mom and dad went to there friends house to visit for the weekend. One hour later of the evening when they left, Leo came.
Now Leo my boyfriend was from Jamaica but her looked white with nice tanned skin. When he was first introduced from my teacher Mr.Whitlow, who everybody thought he was quite awesome no one did not believe him. However when Leo spoke, his accent was the part that one us over. He was about 5'8, messy black hair but it looked nice on him, his face structure looked fine
with his golden brown eyes with nice full lips but not thick.
Sorta like Anglie Jolie lips. His arms were between muscular and thin and had nice calves.
"Hn remember that bet dark caramel?" Leo said, and sits on the couch.
I was on the steps looking at him with a pretend dumb founded
look on my face like i didn't know. Only i did know. I was wearing lose basketball shorts and a purple Wet Seal tang top.
My black hair was braided into two pick tails that passed my shoulder. My dark brown eyes looked into his.
" Don't act like you do not know gurl." Leo eye brow arched upĀ
and he slightly grinned.I loved his accent especially when he said gurl. " Okay I do know. You lost-" Leo moved his head from side to side knowing that i was lying. I sighed and i finally said those two words so he can have his satisfaction.
" You won Leo and i lost the game of basketball because of you. And then you said we had a bet." I said giggling
" Do you want to know what is Momo?" Leo gets up and walks over to Momo.
I look up and i see him hover over me. His grin fades away into a serious looked. The Leo told me in a husky yet soft voice.
" I want eat that honey and have you from behind girl." Leo than kissed me.
Is this supposed to be a story???
What the f**k is that all about?! It makes no sense and is complete rubbish!
I'm real glad you had the balls to send that in. Seriously, keep on. keeping on
Can I give it a zero rating? Wow. Lousy writing
That 'story' uses aweful grammer!! its kind of hard to follow because of the typos!!
It is not good
complete and total rubbish. Makes no sense. A zero rating would be generous.
this is a dumbass 'story' and wtf is your point.
that tolally sucked.
fuck this stupid stoy
11 by 3 in
it was so fucking short.
it doesnt even count as a story.
i clicked this to get horny NOT to laugh at it.
are you a fucking retard????
THIS IS THE STUPIDEST STORY MY RATINGT IS OF COURSE ZEROOO!!!!
omg, i cant even finish reading it because of all the spelling mistakes
Let's see here.
tank- not tang
girl- not gurl that really drives me insane
One huge grammar mistake that really annoys me. you're mixing past tense and present tense.
ex: Leo said, and sits on the couch.
won- not one.
Where you put what you were wearing and the way your hair was done just didn't fit in. It makes no sense.
Nice try, but I think you need a little more practice.