| 2008-06-02 17:32:09 |
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TOTAL CRAP!
EVER HEARD OF PUNCTUATION?!? |
Anonymous |
| 2008-06-03 00:17:28 |
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| terrible spellong and grammar |
Anonymous |
| 2008-06-03 08:40:00 |
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| Dude thats fucking bull shit |
Bull |
| 2008-06-03 09:20:35 |
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| Mate, did you ever hear of something called the 'English Language'? |
AussieRoo |
| 2008-06-03 15:49:29 |
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| What a bullshit.. |
Anonymous |
| 2008-06-03 17:23:21 |
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| hot |
sexy babe |
| 2008-06-11 00:51:11 |
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| Good story. Needs English work. Wish I had a M-in-law like that... |
Burnt up |
| 2008-06-21 13:55:15 |
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nicee read! more details of feelings needed, as
how the sucking felt. and why not fick as well? |
hardup harry |
| 2008-06-22 04:33:22 |
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| Learn to fucking spell |
Anonymous |
| 2008-07-04 11:11:13 |
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| Ever thought of taking English classes? This story turned me off instead of on because of your wonderful English and spellings. |
English Teacher |
| 2008-07-24 11:50:27 |
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YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY A NOVEL WRITTER, SHOULD GET A PULITZER PRIZE FOR YOUR TALENTS.
YOU HAVE TO BE THE BEST NOVEL WRITTING MORON IN THE WORLD |
Anonymous |
| 2008-07-30 14:41:40 |
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| oh my,what type of uneducated idiot are you,enny-way?my dog could do better,numb-nuts..... |
Anonymous |
| 2008-12-10 20:43:09 |
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| U need english classes coz ur spellings bullshit |
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