| 2008-05-06 09:51:02 |
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| Out of breath reading it! Ever heard of grammar? You should try it some time! |
breatless |
| 2008-05-06 10:32:18 |
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ABSOLUTE BULLSHIT!!!
your cock aint no 14inches.
and if your aunties a 38DD and your birds a 42DD that dunt mean her tits are bigger. PAH! |
xHORNYSLUTx |
| 2008-05-06 11:08:06 |
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You might look for another hobby....this isn't working.....
|
JP |
| 2008-05-06 16:57:52 |
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| you are sick |
ttttt |
| 2008-05-06 17:55:12 |
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| Terrible spelling and grammar |
Anonymous |
| 2008-05-06 19:56:36 |
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| This guy was fucking someone or jacking off in the back of the English classroom whe he should have been paying attention. |
anon |
| 2008-05-06 20:43:35 |
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| ever heard of punctuation |
Anonymous |
| 2008-05-06 23:36:46 |
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| i couldnt even read this whole story. someone needs to go finish school and pay attention in english class. |
Anonymous |
| 2008-05-07 01:04:40 |
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| you write like a moron |
Anonymous |
| 2008-05-07 04:42:06 |
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| very worse language & presentation. |
horny reader |
| 2008-05-07 17:17:18 |
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| please... No more. Oh and spellcheck. |
annoyed |
| 2008-05-09 00:43:03 |
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| Please don't write anymore. |
This made my eyes hurt |
| 2008-05-10 16:11:44 |
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| Better spelling, please. |
Dave |
| 2008-05-10 17:20:03 |
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| I love these stories! |
Anna |
| 2008-05-11 04:25:45 |
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| the story was amazing & made me hot & i had to do mustarbation twice |
esee |
| 2008-05-11 23:46:30 |
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| ow |
Anonymous |
| 2008-05-12 07:16:23 |
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| cant say i have read worst than this, cause .... this is shit boring |
Anonymous |
| 2008-05-12 07:23:56 |
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| no comment. cant even get a semi from this |
NON |
| 2008-05-12 07:25:57 |
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| DONT SEND PART2. ITS NOT WORTH READING!!!!! |
FFS |
| 2008-05-12 09:16:07 |
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| make it more reall. the size of your dick and there boobs is way to big. not realistic at all |
Anonymous |
| 2008-05-12 15:08:23 |
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| I take it your Aunt likes to fuck and suck. Not a bad passtime. |
Anonymous |
| 2008-05-13 03:21:21 |
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| crap! |
sam997 |
| 2008-05-14 15:27:22 |
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| Wow,is that one sentence? |
Anonymous |
| 2008-05-14 16:26:34 |
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| That made me so horny! |
Anonymous |
| 2008-05-15 02:55:23 |
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| fantastic |
leeeis |
| 2008-05-18 21:52:40 |
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horrible
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ggg |
| 2008-05-19 13:39:20 |
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| You didn't say your girlfriends boobs are bigger, you just said she's fatter... and 14inches? Please... also, your writing isn't sexy because your grammer changes your tone. revise your writing before you post it.. |
Anonymous |
| 2008-05-25 12:29:33 |
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| Load of crap, 14 inch cock, what are you, a donkey? Start again, use spell check, and dont exaggerate the size of your cock, make it realistic! |
Exeterpussylicker |
| 2008-05-28 08:14:32 |
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| Quit beeting ur meet long enuff to read da grammewr buk. |
also stupid |
| 2008-05-29 00:29:13 |
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| Man! You suck at writing. Go back to first grade and learn how to puncuate and spell! |
Horny slut redhead |
| 2008-05-31 20:05:34 |
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| 14 inches Fuck no and your Aunty you might as well do your Grandmother |
Anonymous |
| 2008-06-05 12:15:52 |
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| That has to be the shittest story yet... 14 inch? Dream on babe... And please sort out ya punctuation... Thought i wud pass out from no spaces |
Annonomous |
| 2008-06-07 17:11:14 |
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| man u a bullshitter fucking here all that time nd u only come once hahaha |
Anonymous |
| 2008-06-10 13:34:50 |
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| since when do you accept stories from half wits. There are better writing on public toilet walls. Give it up, and go back to school |
Gropingramps |
| 2008-06-23 22:37:06 |
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| Reading the comments about ur story was a way better read than the story. Don't give up your day job. That is if your education even allows u to have a job |
Anonymous |
| 2008-06-24 06:51:50 |
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wow...I think I threw up in my mouth a little
I know everyone keeps telling you this but not to be rude or anything you need ALOT more practice before you ppost these kinda of things p again |
SarahXxXbrutallyhonest |
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